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Documentation/HallSensor.md

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 ## Sleep Mode Menu
 
-In Sleep mode, the iron automatically lowers the temperature to 150 °C (default). This default was chosen as it is just below the melting point of many varities of solder. A stand-by lower temperature helps reduce the rate of oxidation and prevents damage to iron tips. In general, when not using the iron, unplug it or let it sleep to increase the longevity of replaceable tips. The default sleep temperature can be customised to suit how you would like it to act.
+In sleep mode, the iron automatically lowers the temperature to 150°C (default). This default setting was chosen as it is just below the melting point of a wide range of solders. A lower standby temperature helps reduce the oxidation rate and prevent damage to the soldering tips. As a general rule, when not in use, unplug the unit or let it go into sleep mode to extend the life of the replaceable tips. The default sleep temperature can be adjusted to your preference.
 
-Simply moving the iron or pressing any button will wake it back up into soldering mode. The sensitivity of this can be adjusted, it is reccomended to adjust this to suit your environment, so that it reliably stays in the sleep mode when not in use but does not go to sleep when in use. (This can vary based on how much movement you are doing when soldering).
+Simply moving the iron or pressing any button will wake it back up into soldering mode. The sensitivity is adjustable. It is recommended to adjust this to suit your environment so that it reliably stays in sleep mode when not in use, but does not go into sleep mode when in use. (This may vary depending on the amount of movement during soldering.)
 
 ### Optional Hall Effect Feature (Pinecil (v1/v2) only):
 

Documentation/Hardware.md

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 ### TS80P
 
-The TS80P is a successor to TS80, and really its what the TS80 should have been. It is nearly identical except it adds USB-PD support for far better compatibility with modern power banks as well as a faster tip removal method.
+The TS80P is the direct successor to the TS80 and essentially what the TS80 should have been from its debut. It is nearly identical except it adds USB-PD support for far better compatibility with modern power banks as well as a faster tip removal method.
 
 - supports _Quick Charge 3.0_ (_QC3_: 9V/2A,12V/1.5A 18W max);
 - supports _Power Delivery_ (_PD_: 9V/3A & 12V/3A, 30W max)\*\*;