Clarify and add details to documents (#1383)

* Update README.md

* Update Menu.md

Thoughts:
- changing the name in display to "Calibrate Tip Offset" (currently shows Calibrate temperature) might be more clear, and then people will not get  nervous and think the number displayed means temperature? since it is just a number, i.e., 765,  and does not say  "765 offset"    I suggest changing to either  "number Offset"   or  changing menu name to "Calibrate Tip Offset"  .  when people incorrectly  beleive the high number is temperature, since it says "calibrate temperature?"  then it leads to unwarranted concern that the pinecil or IronOS is broken.

* Update Menu.md

* Update Temperature.md

clarify language, add punctuation.

* Update HallSensor.md

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* Update History.md

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updated history with some of the Releases that were missing.

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Co-authored-by: discip <53649486+discip@users.noreply.github.com>

* Update Temperature.md

* Update Troubleshooting.md

In which troubleshooting conditions/symptoms would:

(1) Re-calibrating  tip offset temperature be appropriate?
(2) Re-Calibrating Input voltage be appropriate?

I think these 2 internal tests would be helpful sections for Troubleshooting, but not sure of all details to write-up.

* Update GettingStarted.md

Co-authored-by: discip <53649486+discip@users.noreply.github.com>

Documentation/DebugMenu.md

@@ -1,12 +1,11 @@
 # Debugging Menu
 
-In this firmware there is extra debugging information hidden under an extra menu.
-This is accessed by holding the rear (-/B) button on the iron while it is on the home screen.
-
+In this firmware there is extra debugging information in a hidden sub-menu.
 This menu is meant to be simple, so it has no fancy GUI animations.
 
-To move through the menu, use the front (+/A) button.
-To exit, use the rear (-/B) button again.
+- Access by pressing the rear (``-/B``) button on the iron while it is on the home screen.
+- To scroll through the menu, use the front (``+/A``) button.
+- To exit, use the rear (``-/B``) button again.
 
 ## Menu items
 
@@ -63,7 +62,7 @@ This may change during power up as the sources are negotiated in turn.
 
 ### ID
 - This is used by Irons that have an ID and serial number to help check if the iron is authentic. All Pinecil V1 show the same ID number as this is the number programmed into the MCU.
-- The new Pinecil V2 released Aug. 2, 2022 now uses BL706, which enables generating a unique ID/Serial number to every iron. This can be used to verify your Pinecil authenticity [here](https://pinecil.pine64.org/).
+- The new Pinecil V2 released Aug. 2, 2022 now uses BL706, which enables generating a unique ID/Serial number to every iron. This can be used to [verify your V2 authenticity here](https://pinecil.pine64.org/).
 
 ### Max
 
@@ -85,22 +84,22 @@ This indicates the high water mark for the stack for the PID thread. The smaller
 
 ### Hall
 
-This appears if your device is capable of having a magnetic hall effect sensor installed (Pinecil).
-This shows the current field strength reading from the sensor. It can be used to check if the sensor is operational, and measure how strong the magnetic field is for diagnostics and optimal placement of magnets on a stand.
+This appears if your device is capable of having a hall effect sensor installed (Pinecil).
+This shows the current magnetic field strength reading from the sensor. It is used to check if the sensor is operational, and for diagnostics and optimal placement of magnets on a stand (higher number is better/stronger).
 
 # PD Debug menu
 
-On the Pinecil; if the iron is booted up while holding the front button (+); it will show an extra menu for inspecting USB-PD power adapters. Connect to any PD USB power to check Vbus status, even some cell phones with a USB-C port will work if it is PD. It will not show any PD message when Pinecil is powered by DC port, QC, or USB 5V (non-PD).
+On the Pinecil; if the iron is booted up while long holding the front button (`+`); it will show an extra hidden menu for inspecting USB-PD power adapters. We can also connect to any PD USB power to check Vbus status, even some cell phones with a USB-C port will work if it is PD. It will not show PD messages when Pinecil is powered by DC port, QC, or USB 5V (non-PD). For example, if you connect to a QC charger, you may simply see "PD State 6" which indicates "waiting for source" as no PD messages will be ever be sent and you will not be able to use (`+`) to scroll through PD negotiated messages.
 
-The menu navigates like the debug menu, where pressing (+) cycles through elements, and (-) will exit the menu.
+Pressing (`+`) cycles through elements, and (`-`) or unplugging will exit the menu.
 
-The first page shows the PD negotiation stage number; which can be used for diagnosing if PD is not working. Once negotiation is complete; the other screens will show the advertised readings for voltage and current of the proposals.
+The first page shows the PD negotiation stage number; which can be used for diagnosing if PD is not working. Once negotiation is complete; use (`+`) button to advance to other screens which show the different proposals advertised for voltage and current (State 12 means all is good with the PD charger).
 
-##Below is a method for user modification to convert some early models of Pinecil V1 to safely support 24V on the DC5525 barrel.
-Warning (do this at your own risk, read everything in this debug document, and go to the Pine64 chat if you need tips). If you do the cut incorrectly, you could render the Pinecil non-working.
+#### Below is a method for user modification to convert some early models of Pinecil V1 to safely support 24V on the DC5525 barrel.
+⚠️ Warning: do this at your own risk, read everything in this document, and go to the [Pine64 community chat](https://wiki.pine64.org/wiki/Pinecil#Community_links) if you desire advice. An incorrect cut of the trace could render the Pinecil non-working.
 
-A simple user modification to the PCB on some models of V1 allows it to safely use DC24V by cutting a trace line to the Vbus which held it back to 21V. You can check whether your Pinecil V1 needs the update or can benefit from it by using the PD debug menu. After a few seconds or after PD negotiates (state above 5) it will show [No VBus] if the VBus modification is performed correctly or not needed (i.e., late model V1) or it shows [VBus] if the mod has not been done and there is still a connection to the Vbus.
+Background: a simple user modification to the PCB on some models of original V1 allows it to safely use DC24V by cutting a trace line to the Vbus which held it back to 21V. You can check whether your Pinecil V1 needs the update or can benefit from it by using the PD debug menu. After a few seconds or after PD negotiates (state above 5) it will show `[No VBus]` if the VBus modification is performed correctly or not needed (i.e., late model V1). Alternately, if it shows `[VBus]`, then the mod has not been done and there is still a connection to the Vbus (and Vbus connection limits you to 21V).
 
-The mod method is shown in the February 2022 Pine64 community [Updates](https://www.pine64.org/2022/02/15/february-update-chat-with-the-machine/). Early Pinecil V1 models required cutting a trace. Late model V1 made sometime in 2022 came with [No Vbus] already displayed, and no mod required.
+The mod method is shown in the February 2022 [PINE64 community updates](https://www.pine64.org/2022/02/15/february-update-chat-with-the-machine/). Early Pinecil V1 models required cutting a trace. Late model V1 made sometime in 2022 came with '[No Vbus]' already displayed, and no mod is required.
 
-The V2 model released Aug. 2, 2022 is an overhauled PCB with all relevant components capable of 28V. V2 requires no mods to support use of 24V DC Barrel port charger.
+The V2 model released Aug. 2, 2022 is an overhaul of the PCB with all relevant components capable of 28V. V2 requires no mods to support the use of 24V DC Barrel jack charger.